my mother

[without name]

it is my first attempt to write








http://www8.0zz0.com/2009/01/31/13/945254407.jpg


my mother do not leave me alone



ineed you


i can not imagine my world without you


you are relieving my pains


i know that i make you angry about me alot


but if you come back i will not do that again


your smile light my life and without your smile ican not live


please tell me what iam supposed to do without you


i simply can not,iam not strong enough to force this hard life alone


ineed you,

[CRISTIANO RONALDO]

جميل يا هوما بس كان نفسى عربى
وبحبك يا امى حنانك فى دمى
وحبك فى قلبى
يااااااااااااا عالام

[كريم الباشا]

here are some misspellings:


not (my moter) but (my mother)
not (angery) but ( angry)
not ( light my live) but (light my life )
and finally :
not (i) but (I)
it is capital every where


nice topic

[without name]

thank u karem 4 this noitces i will edit it

[جدxجد]

thank u hooma (http://www.scusuez.org/vb/member.php?u=764) 4 this topic

[the animator]

if this is your first attempt to write
please make it the last
:laughing at:
that was a joke
it's really good thread
but I have little notice
not (angry about me) use (angry with me) ..... I guess

[كريم الباشا]

yeah animator you are right
i did not know how i did not notice it


please Hooma ,Be merciful with the English language

[the animator]

i did not know how i did not notice it


if hooma is the writer then you should notice alot








please Hooma ,Be merciful with the English language



she don't have any mercy at all

[LDVKH]

hooma
are you sure that you studied english before ?>
I think noo
:laughing at:
I think hooma will kill

كريم الباشا , the animator & me

[كريم الباشا]

:laughing at: :laughing at:

[the animator]

it's really good for us
that she is not here now

[without name]

if this is your first attempt to write
please make it the last






hahahaha i will be famous after writing this thread

[without name]

thank u hooma (http://www.scusuez.org/vb/member.php?u=764) 4 this topic



thank u 4 posting

[without name]

yeah animator you are right
i did not know how i did not notice it

you must notice this


please Hooma ,Be merciful with the English language



hahahahahahaha i will try

[without name]

hooma
are you sure that you studied english before ?>
I think noo
:laughing at:
I think hooma will kill

كريم الباشا , the animator & me



really i will kill you

the last thing i remember that i learned a b c

[without name]

it's really good for us
that she is not here now

absolutely you are very lucky

[SleeplessHeart]

nice hooma but try to reduce some of the small mistakes the next time
thnx hooma

[without name]

nice hooma but try to reduce some of the small mistakes the next time
thnx hooma
thank you sleepless you are right i should be careful